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Sunday, December 6, 2009

Sun Water Air


Standing beside the sun water and air,
God's medium to life for man, his children,
Alone here, but in glory I breathe and dwell.

Breath of fresh air that swing around me
While I bow down to tensions yet endure,
Persist always, though choice less along life.

Light so bright, resilience many shine on me,
Yet they don't alter my abiding solitude,
My minds isolation that none ever glimpsed.

Waves hugged the shores endlessly with bliss,
Land never asked hitherto loved and caressed,
Still the hunger in me never abates nor sated.

Reasons WHY has no answers that pleased me,
Searched for impetus reasons for fairy-tale,
God the ultimate glory has goals unquestioned.

Trusting his solicit love for offspring's,
I found my love and reasons for questions,
Answers delivered to me unquenched, candid.

7 comments:

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Inspired by the picture.........i couldn't resist but write this instant poem.

The Intrepid Journeyman said...

"Waves hugged the shores endlessly with bliss,
Land never asked hitherto loved and caressed,
Still the hunger in me never abates nor sated...."

Standing alone in the sea shore listening to the waves, breathing the fresh air....admiring the god given gifts of life and the nature...Sapna your words really transcend us to a different world!!!

Rani said...

Soppu... it gets better and better .... Its superb!!

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks dear Inrepid Journeyman and Thanks Rani for the lovely comments

Anonymous said...

Breath of fresh air or breathe?
Too deep or too complex due to the way it's phrased?

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Its breath of fresh air,thanks for correction,but i hate those who make themselves anonymous,has no guts to say you name loud

ശാന്തകാവുമ്പായി said...

'my minds isolation'I can touch it.