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A footstep so smooth,the words so candid,yet strong
the mind so full of empathy
came stright up to my heart,
knock knock knock, are we there?
are we still strangers too?
The long pile of stories of life,
unfolded, into thy lap,with tears,
some horrid,some slimy,yet so true.
solutions came,step to be taken for
knock knock knock, are we there?
are we still strangers too?
Moments of silence with tears
emotions with high voltage
darkness so deep and fathemless
yet with keyboard and word of whisper
you brought a ray of hope and light
life has habits of sprouting,
if given the right kind of light,
the right kind of manure,which,
oozed out from words of wisdom.
knock knock knock, are we there?
are we still strangers too?
Ray of light sprouted,so also life,
from with in me,and my words,
has wings of fire,which pasted
right into paper,poems and news.
the thrill didn't last much
black venoms of fire of satan
swirled around me,eating me up.
knock knock knock, are we there?
are we still strangers too?
The silence,depicted as 'ignore'
lag and other chitchats of words
argument,words of war and SILENCE.
life went off action,search,search
no sound, no light, no life.
SILENCE SILENCE AND SILENCE
knock knock knock, are we there?
are we still strangers too?
9 comments:
few words of experiences of life.........
you broght a ray of hope and light
life has habbits of sprouting,
if given the right kind of light,
the right kind of manure,which,
oozed out from words of wisdom.
............................
we are not strangers sapna..
powerful one..
loved it..
Hariprasad.
Sapna,
its profound.
in the long run of life, strangers turn out to be friends too.
friends end up being strangers somehow.
gist is, strike a balance.
love
serena.
"If you can see only what light reveals, and hear only what sound announces,
Then in truth, you do not see nor do you hear."
-Khalil Gibran-
Feels good to have your comments on the clouds :) thanks
Well...as you said in your verse - candid yet powerful words!
Sometimes...relationships can be swindling...its so difficult to see and fathom the depth or the superficiality...best of friends can be most superficial and strangers can be the most closest...guess we learn it there and then!
Wonderfully put in words in your verse!
Sapna,
Melodies and music are different in real compared to strangers coz with strangers you let out and relax being unknown.
Moments of silence with tears
emotions with high voltage
darkness so deep and fathemless
yet with keyboard and word of whisper
you brought a ray of hope and light
- Sadness here and hope things are fine now..
Dear all.....നിറകണ്ചിരി, ഇത്ര നല്ല അഭിപ്രായത്തിന്നു.....Sereen , you are the perfect answer to the strngers become good frinds and thanks.Jac, thanks for the qote ....which explains your impression about my poem Seema,,,,,,,thanks for your perfound yet lovely comments. Priya..... thanks for the thoughtful and careful comments.
Good one. Strangers turn out to be friends too or maybe beyond that. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks venus...you are right
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