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Monday, May 26, 2008

Loss and Absence

Day in and Day out.
The longer the days ,
the faster the thoughts run,
running so fast as time,
never stopping for nothing

Have you ever thought!
what made your run and toil!
run after the day and time
which never waits for you.
Never thinking ,if you reached
Never looking back over shoulder,
to make sure you are not missing.

The loss happens with time,
never thinking the status,
never thinking about who,
where how and what and when?
loss and absence does happen,
which makes every one equal.

Death,the moment of loss,
the moment of absence,
which none has any control
none cross over the hazard.
Is this the answer to life?
Our goal of life ends there?

Do we stop life and death
with fear of loosing and absence.
In fact that becomes a target.
Before loss and death,
we need to achieve goals
which are destined and ordained.
Decided by the almighty who
gave us the death and life.
The answer lies there,
the perfect answer and full stop.

38 comments:

Sapna Anu B.George said...
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Sapna Anu B.George said...

Another momentery thought process....... no meaning and even no target or goals!!!!

മുസാഫിര്‍ said...

hmm, good thoughts, I think we are like satelites. Once in orbit it starts moving and never stops till fully burnt out.

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Musafir.........good simili

mitr_bayarea said...

Good one on life and death..

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks mitr_bayarea

Jac said...

:)

Jac said...
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Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Jac.........glad that the poem brought a smile to you.

sajeesh said...

Hi Sapna,
The uncertainties of the present always give way to the enchanted possibilities of the future.
You are destined for greatness.
Enjoy your journey... all the best
thanks
Sajeesh

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks for the inspirational comments

Stacey said...

Lovely words, I enjoyed this :-D

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thank you Stacy for the lovely words

Rex Cox said...

I like how this was written, and how it done so with a sense of wisdom...and I'm glad you liked my little bit of lyric about the rich society girl.

Sayani said...

thats a strange truth we all live and die and yet believe we are not among the crowd !!!!

loved your post ...thoughtful and truthful

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Rex Cox,you have excellent lyrics. Thanks Syani for your wonderful wonderful words.

Seema said...

death is so strange and take our possession without our consent...u said a lot thru ur poem....


nice poem..

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks for the unique understanding ....you are right,death robbed me of my precious possessions not once twice,my parents,my dad and mom.

cyclopseven said...

Well sapna..you got the entire life rounded up in this verse. Good write.

'The loss happens with time,
never thinking the status,
never thinking about who,
where how and what and when?
loss and absence does happen,
which makes every one equal.'

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks my dear cyclopseven ..... life is an answer you get out of adition subtraction or multiplication,you have to decide which equation use and when???

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Raghu Ram Prasad said...

lovely writinngs and nice to read

venus66 said...

Very thoughtful. Good work.
Hope you had a good vacation. Take care. Bye.

jac said...

Lost my username by my foolishness. Follow my name for the new link.

PJ said...

I made it! How very heartfelt your thoughts are. Very lovely.

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Shankar ReghuRam... for your visits... keep reading.Tahnks Venus we had a good holidays and the aftermirth of the hoiliday thoughts will be soon posted... I will look into your new pages Jac, Thanks for the visit PJ and finally you made it, keep visiting

Swati said...

Hi Sapna, thanks for visiting my blog...
You have expressed your thoughts beautifully...

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Swati for the lovely words

ani said...

sorryy

this was the only one i could read and comment on..
am badd.. i cant read mal :(
should have tried harder as a kid.. hnnmm now am more determined to learn it..

lovely post.. loss and absence.. unless one looses something.. one doesnt value it.. nor realises the importance of it..

Sapna Anu B.George said...

thanks a lot for the visit.....and do read more

അപര്‍ണ..... said...

I think burning in the furnace of life makes us forget about the meaningless of life....

Nice thoughts...... :)

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Aparna..........

ബഷീര്‍ വെള്ളറക്കാട്‌ / pb said...

Good thoughts...sapna.
we should do somethings before the loss and the absence .

the Death which wil come with out knocking our door..

we have to count ourself before we counted by somebody.

Sapna Anu B.George said...

നന്ദി ബഷീര്‍

Sureshkumar Punjhayil said...

Good one... Best wishes...!!!

Mini said...

Loss always stirs up the Muse...wonderful insights...power-packed verses..leaves a lump in the throat...
Well done!

Sapna Anu B.George said...

Thanks Mini......

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